good attempt
you need to change up the beat and maybe add more sounds
you got close to doing that at the very end but anyway
this sounds like an intro into something EPIC
good attempt
you need to change up the beat and maybe add more sounds
you got close to doing that at the very end but anyway
this sounds like an intro into something EPIC
Thanks, dude. I didn't expect people to be this nice, I was expecting youtube type hater comments
I guess everyone has to work up to making great songs.
damn man
wow i have nothing else left to say im speechless
very good
you could be the next trip hop king haha
yea this would fall under that and its very relaxing music
love the beat
check out bonobo-hes a trip hop legend
wa wa wee wa!
very niiice...high five
haha yo man im diggin this track
catchy ass tune and it does have a lincoln park kinda of vibe...kick ass vocals would be sweet
but very well made piece here
Good to hear from you again! Vocals would have been nice but I can't sample and I can't sing :'( so no vocals is probably a good thing. Im going to go slap chop my brother in the face now, PEACE!
starts...
a little slow and little too repetitive but
but other than that its a pretty awesome piece
like the ending too
good job
thanks.
potential
this has potential....you gotta make it go harder
and the repetitiveness is fine cuz its a rap instrumental
but i like the melody
job
yo00000000
work on the volumes of your melody
and play around with fl some more before you post something up
youll make something amazing and then you'll have the joy to share it with the world so just keep practicing and you'll get a hang of it
thanks for the response :D
Yah i'm still in need of major practice and help so ill work on that
:D
sick nasty
awesome melody when the song started to pick up
this has potential to be a crazy nice song
5/5
and check out my stuff if you get a chance
Haha wow, 11 votes and still over a 4. I didnt think it was that good lol. But yah sure Ill check out your stuff. Thanks for the review :]
hmmm
sounds more of a rap/hip-hop instrumental too me
if you put more "umph" to this one it could be even better than it is now because this has potential to be great
5/5
i like to make all kinds of beats and i love to rap.. so anyway thanks for stopping on my page, enjoy the music and show some support!
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